Okay people shut up with how its flawless
YES it is a great cartoon and the story line was pretty decent, im not going to say anything about the creators art skills because i know that people start from differant times and learn as they go.
what i AM going to say is that there could be a lot of improvment on the story itself.
It's very anime ish and not in a good way. the flashback had no sence to what was going on and to be honest i dont think you put your best into the story you worked your hardest on the animation, you need to spend good time story boarding and if you actually DID spend a lot of time on that, then you need to improve on it.
...the sound effects were pretty neat tho...but again very stereotypical anime which will not pull at any of my heart strings by watching this.